Thanks everyone!

@all, Thanks for the comments.
@scopeman, its really interesting and strange, but i believe that the future will be better if we change our orientation as we begin to take the positions of power.

Hmm! Nice piece, i felt terrible while reading the initial part, ‘…i shall do everything to defy you’ i think reflects the motivating force behind our current crop of leaders.

Thanks everyone, i appreciate all of your comments and advice.

Oops! Midway through it, i thought i should deviate and send the message to both boys and girls. I think i messed it up there. Also not using proper stanza formation and rhyme scheme is deliberate. I was trying out some styles that i seemed to like in an ancient literature. All the same thanks [...]

You are right Ayo, the initial draft had some order, but while copying and pasting it became jumbled and disorganised. But i never wanted to make it in stanzas; i was actually looking for way to give my thoughts a rapid ascending movement. Thanks

Ciao! Thanks for the comments, am glad you all like it.

hmm! Intriquing and suspense filled. Thumbs up guy.

i like the conclusion, ‘what if God lied? Then my faith would still never have died’

I tagged it initially under uncategorised, it could be the admins fixed it up as poetry.

@ all! Thanks alot for d comments, i’ll work on d defects… Tagging is as poetry is an unintended mix up. Am still new to naijastories and am yet to understand how certain things work over here. I’ll see whether i can make the necessary changes. THANKS once again.

Oops! Nice story, i was in the same situation that u were in, but the difference is that i never used to pay for the cheats, i always sourced for them by myself and actually became a phone guru myself. Then suddenly the codes started crashing every three three days and i started getting frustrated. [...]