Well done, really sweet and err… pls use appropraitely.

Thank you, Ld, I’m happy you took time out to read and laugh! Cheers!

Thank you, Sparky…and lol@u had to come back….dont crack those ribs oh!! Thanks a lot

I love this, twas simply and nice. Well done!

Not all babies are made at night

I think this was very good. Very nicely written, although I don’t know the inside scoop on the NS angle. I see you guys have been having fun

allusion to…i mean to say

Ditto at Lade…I disagree with the allusion with single parenting., but I like the use of words…and @LD, he didn’t exactly say Christian, only godly although I’m almost sure he meant it
Well done, Paul

Good work…Well done!

Good work…at this point it would be pointless to say I didn’t understand originally
Well done!

Good story,…the thing that told me what will happen was the tag…Should Admin leave that out? Dont think so , because we’ll eventually write books with excerpts at the back telling us about the story, so at the end of the day what matters is how the story was told. This was good except for [...]

U missed the rare opportunity to be ministered to under my NS anointing!
seriously@ editor…will inbox most def…

Yipee!!…Jay….Abby dashed me points!(sticking out my tongue)

awww….Abby…thanks for the points…Wherever you have taken it from, it shall be replenished, ur oil shall never run dry(or poilts)!!… and I asked that naughty Jaywriter who is supposed to be my friend to dash me points, and he was feeling! …but you stole Gretty’s line(YOU ROCK!)…whatever is she gonna say now? I [...]

@Ejins, awww@heart of gold….lol….the passion is painful yeah….passion that pains…title of my next fictional narrative…thanks for that…:-) U will read more of me , although my worst writerly fear is that I’ll wake up one day and have nothing to write…at least nothing worthy of anyone’s time and bandwidth! God forbid! I hear you say…Thanks [...]

lol….Love conquers all, yeah , and covers a multitude of sins
You can imagine how much love is needed to cover N’s sins!
Thank you, dear, thank you for taking time out to read my stuff, and the use of your gigabytes!

Thank you, Jay, and I’m glad you took time out to read. Punctuation errors noted..I think I need an editor asap
…and I’m glad you like the journey…Endings are the hardest!

…and Lade….yeah N will always be home…that’s the thing you never really hate her enough , its just that I so want her to change(sob!sob)..