Marya, thanks dear…point noted.

*thumbs up*
And to think there were pics to boot…….

@elly, thanx….will work harder on my deliveries.

Thanx a lot peeps…all ur kind words have been noted.
I am humbled…

This is d first piece am reading from u, I tink u got it; I could hear his brain churning.

This makes for a good read Remi….well done

This didnt work for me, I admit I’ve been through some of ur past work and was impressed. The story line was quite ok…..but something was missing for me…..

Xikay…I see u!
@remi, thx sister, corrections have been noted and filed for d future. Thanx dear

Thanks all for the comments.
@raymond, it is a daydream, just something that happened and Iin my mind’s eye and how I rearranged,the wayI wanted it to play out. Warped(distorted) fantasy….
@emmanuella…it is a memoir, something that did happen, coz I was sitting there and writing a story in my mind that wasn’t real

Brilliant piece scopeman, very brilliant.

Whao…am floored, by the talents on the site. Good work bro….

Terrible!
How are u holding up? we just have to pray the perpetrators of this evil act, are caught and dealt with.

Omg!!! I smell a rotten rodent here jare….haba!!! The guard, her neighbours and even d boyfriend heard nothing?? Spooky…