Hahahaha!!! I wiah something out-of-the-ordinary had happened too. But since it is not a work of fiction, I can only tell di troot!
I appreciate all the comments and hope to share more of my writing here in due course.
God bless.

Scopeman, thanks for staying to the bitter end. Actually, this whole ‘story’ wasnt really meant to be anything more than an account of the events. It wasn’t originally written in three parts and I didnt structure it in any particular way. It had to be broken up to meet Naijastories publishing criteria, so I just [...]

Thanks everyone. I appreciate the feedback. I hope the concluding parts prove to be equally well received.
@Myne Whitman….you are right. It was on my FB page!

Nice one Dipo.
Brief and straight to the kissing point!!
Well done.

Ada, K0b0k0 is right not to give the story a ‘happy ending’ because these type of stories NEVER end happily. He is not writing for you or I, or even himself, but for Miriam and thousands of little girls like her that know no joy and some never will. As for what makes men ‘go [...]

I think you should and could have treated the whole topic with a little more sensitivity. In some areas, the narrative almost appeared pornographic and ‘celebratory’, detracting from empathising with the despair Mariam was going through. For example, a victim of incest and rape would never use words like ‘fuck’ or ‘cock’, because the experience [...]