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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE WET CHILD (3) 7 hours, 48 minutes ago · View
Now you succeeded in spookin me!
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE END OF LOVE 1: BREAK UP 8 hours, 48 minutes ago · View
@ Xikay: I suppose pay you o.You’ve been educating me a lot here.This gives me a funny feel that my story published here titled ‘it’s not that easy’ was written using the ‘second person stream of consciousness’ style, if there is anything like that………lol.
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE WET CHILD (2) 8 hours, 51 minutes ago · View
Loving this…..
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE WET CHILD (1) 9 hours, 2 minutes ago · View
@ xikay: See wetin we dey always talk? Na different stroke for different folks be that.
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post PRETENCE, AN ACT OF DISHONOUR 9 hours, 6 minutes ago · View
Emmanuela muses again…..
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post FOR THIS LOST ONE 9 hours, 9 minutes ago · View
This is good Shope.I hope the hope of the poet persona comes to pass.
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE WET CHILD (1) 3 days, 2 hours ago · View
Another Raymond Classic! Loving this one already. Only issue I have is with the description of the school. I think it dragged too long, but make I never decide.Perhaps, it might add something to the story later om.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Them. 3 days, 3 hours ago · View
And the boy goed gaga……I have a thing for stories that are simply told, so I am loving this one ro the bone right now.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post WHEN THE SUN REFUSES TO RISE… 3 days, 9 hours ago · View
I hope there is more to this.Thgis is telling the Biafra story with a whole new perspective.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE END OF LOVE - 3: LIFE GOES ON 3 days, 10 hours ago · View
I like how you finally wrapped this up Myne. Very good one.Would love to see this in a media where it can reach more people.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE END OF LOVE - 2: HARD TO LET GO 3 days, 10 hours ago · View
na wah o! What we would do for love sometimes. I like the progression in this part. A couple of cliches though:’When he walked out the front door,’ methinks when he walked should suffice. Also, ‘I did become sick and ended up not going to work for the next remaining days of the week.’ I [...]
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post THE END OF LOVE 1: BREAK UP 3 days, 10 hours ago · View
Ok…..liking this ‘conversationless’ style. Off to read the remaining parts.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Do you have problems? 3 days, 15 hours ago · View
Na wah o!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Sexual Healing 3 days, 18 hours ago · View
Amaka, you have convinced me again. I’ll have to ditto Myne sha, as per the transitions. Somewhere in my mind, I think you rushed this a bit. I believe the story could still have unfolded beautifully more than this, but maybe its just me. Nothing can detract from the effort you put into this one. [...]
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Mad World 3 days, 18 hours ago · View
Feels good to read this again.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post The day we danced 1 week, 2 days ago · View
Things can always get better, if we want them to be. I love this poem.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Junk Junk Junk! 1 week, 2 days ago · View
This nutritionist will make a good writer someday, just put in work, work, work!
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Journey to Nowhere - 2 1 week, 2 days ago · View
Meen! This one na poetic journey o! I like the idea behind this, but presentation was below par. Watch out for your capitalisations, and the typos were a tad too much.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post Profession: Development Worker 1 week, 2 days ago · View
Omo you go fear satire! I find this really good, with a multi-faceted meaning. It aptly describes the hypocritical nature of some people who claims to be fighting for the masses, when, in fact, they are fighting for their own pockets.
You did good with this one Kabura.
Well done!!!
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Lawal Opeyemi Isaac commented on the blog post My Three Patients 1 week, 2 days ago · View
like say na the meat dey bring customers…..lol. This is good writing berry.I have this nagging feeling that something could have been better about it, but I can’t place it right now. I’ll come back to check it out.
On a lighter note, I’m curious about what inspired this.
Well done!!!
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