Elly Turtoe @elly ?
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Titin’ola 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Yeah i agree with Fred, ‘he said’ or she said, helps a lot even though it may seem stereotyped they actually do a lot of work. Nice and simple story, but i feel like i missed the joke at the end. Was it because of the incorrect grammar?
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Waiting for Tomorrow 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Oh and i liked this one too, i read your other poem just now and it was good too. You captured it well, today will never defeat tomorrow,amen.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post THE BANQUET AND THE FUNERAL 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Very gloomy, almost too gloomy but i liked it. Well plotted, each stanza was packed, good job.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Growth’s Bumpy Path 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Yeah i agree with Myne the last stanza packed a punch, i liked this.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post KNEE DEEP (1) 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Chukwudum this was nice, i love the way you told the story, even though i did a re-read to fully comprehend it, you got me waiting for more. thumbs up!
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Maybe… 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
This flowed well,just like a smoothie, i liked it.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post The diary of a Naija boy in the diaspora - Say you are one of them! 1 day, 11 hours ago · View
Good job you did well with this piece, it’s well written and it struck a chord in me. I have an uncle in almost the same shoes as the examples you gave. it’s a very sad life…
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post The Electorate 1 day, 12 hours ago · View
Hit its mark without saying much, i recommend as a nice and easy read.
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Elly Turtoe posted on the forum topic WHEN SOMEONE CALLS A WRITER'S EFFORT, 'RUBBISH' in the group Creative Writing: 3 days, 8 hours ago · View
Alas i’m one of the people Emmanuella referred to and i still maintain that horrible is too strong a word to dish out to any writer. Well as for Kaine Agary’s saga- i say all’s well that ends well- Mr. work trasher got his comeuppance. @ Emmanuella i think a ‘lame’ comment is better than [...]
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Elly Turtoe posted on the forum topic Readers wanted in the group Books 101: 3 days, 9 hours ago · View
Well i say you pass across the need to read to as many as possible, book readings too, book clubs, etc.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post It doesn’t last forever 3 days, 9 hours ago · View
You did well with portraying sibling rivalry and her sister’s mistakes. For a debut this was nice i liked it and your use of adjectives too, it was just the right dose.
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Elly Turtoe posted an update: 3 days, 9 hours ago · View
Word of the day! Rhadamanthine: harshly strict
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post FOR THE LOVE OF BLACKBERRY 3 days, 9 hours ago · View
Oh this was fun, LASTMA the high way r……
The dream twist was quite unexpected for me, good job Berry. -
Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Africa, the Betrayed. 4 days, 12 hours ago · View
Lengthy but nice, why do we really prefer to blame an old lover when our sons have fared no better. God help us. nice one!
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Late Night Visitor 4 days, 12 hours ago · View
NICE! You threw me off, real late night visitors.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Library Talks 4 days, 12 hours ago · View
Very creative, i like this sort of stories. Thumbs up!
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post Get Your ‘Browsing Cheats’ Here 1 week ago · View
Good write up, serious and entertaining too, wish for the day that our internet services will be affordable and reliable, so as to avoid illegalities and what have you.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post SMALL PIKIN(2 of 2) 1 week ago · View
Good ending to a well spurn yarn!
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post SMALL PIKIN(1 of 2) 1 week ago · View
Na real big pikin she find, lol. I liked the way you crafted this, it flowed so well.
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Elly Turtoe commented on the blog post TEARS OF MY HEART 1 week ago · View
This is so sad, Nigeria help us get it right. I felt your words they hit my hearts cord, you reminded me again that everyday we need to do something to make Nigeria a better place for all.
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