The horror genre of literature is one that hasn’t been taken by Nigerian writers but I’m glad to say that that will soon change.I’m not a huge fan of horror but guy! You nailed this one…now imma have nightmares for weeks!

The horror genre of literature is one that hasn’t been taken by Nigerian writers but I’m glad to say that that will soon change.I’m not a huge fan of horror buy guy! You nailed this one…now imma have nightmares for weeks!

This was one riveting read…you made me wonder what would have really happened if christ hadn’t died for us.I never really thought of it in the light you threw until now..keep up the good work!

Girl,you’ve got a great deal of potential…for a first attempt this is really good..personally,i loved reading this story.It reminded me of my first crush when i was in secondary school..I personally don’t see any flaws apart from the switch in names towards the end of the story…
can’t wait to read your next attempt..

Lawd!!! No comment! I have to go back and read the first part abeg…scopeman is right…you write with such passion!

Mercy beat me to it! I was going to single out that sentence too…it snagged my attention instantly…as for familiarly pushy men,they are all over the place! it can be quite annoying.I find being a frosty bitch dims the fire out for em! lol…nice story Berry..did i mention you’re one of the people whose works [...]

Awwww…beautiful poem..short and sweet

Brilliant depiction of a typical day on the streets of naija…Myne pointed out what i noticed already so my lips are sealed…

I certainly didn’t envision this ending! Nice one Agema…just goes to show that all that tribalistic sentiment is crap most of the time! Poor chap! and to think no one was charitable enough to help him out..how do people do that? turn their backs on someone who really needs them? na wa! may we deliver [...]

I like that you portray woman as a metaphysical person..a woman is a deep person with an inbuilt meter for detecting things that happen on a less physical realm…beautiful poem really and i noticed the dump* error as well…

This is one revealing review…now im going to have to buy this book and read it well done!

It’s been said all! personally,i just want to say that you did a great job passing this message across…keep it up!

@sambright…I’m really psyched that you think its brilliant work…it was written in one of those moments when introspection went a little deeper than i expected.its pure fiction of course but we all know that fiction is art reflecting life so…

oh yeah! thanks for that typo…noticed it after i had posted it..one love!

Dude,you look like a great friend of mine! Your pix is neat and so is your interview…i agree with what you said about cassava republic and farafina.I believe that with time,they will be giving new writers more spotlight…keep up the good work!

@Jaywriter…its an engagement ring from Mallam shine beside some garage park! lol…
@ahmed…awwww….thanks!
@raymond…here’s to knowing you a bit too!

Wow! you meant to pass across powerful emotions here and you did it quite well i must say…you’re good! Your masterful use of narration is commendable.I love how you used the character of the old woman to depict the passion that i know is the hearts of many Nigerians for a better tomorrow.well done Augustine!

Great Story.Even the evil man has someone he cares about.It baffles me that they never stop to think about the people in their own lives and how they would feel if the evil they perpetrate on others is done to their loved ones. He got what he deserved…well done!

This story is one of the best I’ve read under the vote chronicles so far.You may not think that you are a poet ray but your infusion of poetic language states otherwise.I love it!
Plus your ‘show not tell’ technique is off the hook.You don win as far as I’m concerned oh!

Wished i had been there to witness the literary giant in all her conversational splendor! You did a fine job of making me feel i was there.Well done!

I like the way you wrote this piece in a conversational manner as if you were gisting a friend about this over tea.I know for a fact sha that this isn’t the end of the story? No? ditto ray’s comments by the way…keep it up!