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focus commented on the post, The Prayer Warrior 4 months, 2 weeks ago

A first. The supernatural angle, i mean. Only wish i could see the day when my prayers would turn to swords and chop my enemies into shreds. Guess then, i’d become a pastor. Nice angle again. You had me taken.

focus commented on the post, Achebe rejects 50cent’s use of the “Things Fall Apart” title 4 months, 2 weeks ago

I am biased…On Achebe’s side. So i respect his decision without questions. Also, this article sheds true light on the reasons behind his decision. Well done sir.

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

Thanks Kaycee, let’s hope it wins awards

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

thank you Myne

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

Glad you enjoyed it Ray, thanks

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

All noted ma. I shan’t stop. Thanks.

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

the problem is am not really learned in the tagging processses. but i shall try next time

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

Hmm, i’m speechless reading your comments. your encouragements are really appreciated. Thanks all. It really is for your reading pleasure that the stories get created. So i am honored to say the least that you have all enjoyed reading. Thanks all.

focus commented on the blog post A lost cause 5 months, 2 weeks ago

they call me FOCUS

focus commented on the blog post WHAT NIGHT IS …2 5 months, 2 weeks ago

Sorry all for the lengthy silence. Corrections have been noted, commendments acknowledged. Thanks all.

focus wrote a new blog post: A lost cause 6 months ago

The dark green lorry is full and begins a creaky and bumpy ride down the dry path. From where I sit, I idly watch the dust covered plants as they run off in the opposite direction; slowly at first before picking up some speed. I am quite conversant with this route and with this journey. [...]

focus wrote a new blog post: WHAT NIGHT IS …2 6 months ago

Read Part 1 - What Night is The twin headlamps of an oncoming vehicle spot a snake on the side of an untarred road and the reticent reptile slithers off quickly into a nearby bush. Such is not uncommon in deserted areas like this, worse still, at hours as late as now. The lamps finally come [...]

focus commented on the blog post AN IMAGE EXPENSE 6 months ago

Well Tola , guess i was trying to potray a worldly being in my own way. Sorry if it didn’t flow well for you.
As for learning his lessons….

focus commented on the blog post MOCKING THE HISSING WAVES 6 months, 1 week ago

Thank you as well Myne. Highly honored.

focus commented on the blog post MOCKING THE HISSING WAVES 6 months, 1 week ago

Aha, at least you understood. Yes, would seek another way to convey the message. Thanks Jef

focus commented on the blog post MOCKING THE HISSING WAVES 6 months, 1 week ago

Okay Ray, noted. Thanks.

focus wrote a new blog post: MOCKING THE HISSING WAVES 6 months, 1 week ago

I know a place where he often went. It was on the seashore. Just in front of the ocean where I worked as a boatman. He would sit there for hours watching the birds of the heavens as they swooped and rose in the beautiful blue and white background. He would also watch, below the [...]

focus commented on the blog post My Life 6 months, 1 week ago

Incestuous Lesbianism…(Can i use that?)
…Yawa

focus commented on the blog post AN IMAGE EXPENSE 6 months, 1 week ago

Thanks…I thought the Kite was a bird of prey that feasted upon chic(k)s…Well, ‘Eagle’ noted. Afterall it is the greatest of predator birds, right?
Thanks again @Brwnbutterflai…

focus commented on the blog post AN IMAGE EXPENSE 6 months, 1 week ago

Thanks man…i certainly will…won’t I?

focus commented on the blog post AN IMAGE EXPENSE 6 months, 1 week ago

Thanks @Adaobi. About the second story…what’s a tale without morals?
Thanks again and i’d really be careful about my peering habits…won’t let you catch me…lol

focus wrote a new blog post: AN IMAGE EXPENSE 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Local research, subject to verification, claims that in public you come across an unknown stranger once in every two minutes. Another concurs, affirming that the only reason one comes across a recognizable face in public is as a result of nature’s design in which familiar faces inadvertently search themselves out. And in considering this, has [...]

focus commented on the blog post THE WET DREAMS OF A WIFE 9 months, 2 weeks ago

this may be coming late but it is quite an impressive read. It was only after completiong the story that i realized that i was’nt even logged on to comment. If i may, it’s SWEET.

focus commented on the blog post JUMPING ACROSS WORLDS 9 months, 2 weeks ago

casey, please, can you point out an example of conflicting tenses? like help me to understand?…thanks

focus commented on the blog post JUMPING ACROSS WORLDS 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Okay, i understand but i would prefer it if you pick up a paragraph with an error an correct it for me siting an example at the same time, just like ray did earlier… thanks.

focus commented on the blog post JUMPING ACROSS WORLDS 9 months, 2 weeks ago

@xikay, thanks for the rouse/arouse correction, hadn’t noticed it until now. But I still don’t understand what correction(s) you have made concerning the summary thought…Please enlighten me further

focus commented on the blog post IN THE MORNING 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Casey, big ups. I believe everyone posesses unique skills as regards issues of pen and paper. As long as you have an eager audience.But be sure to bear in mind that no one is perfect. Corrections should be duly considered. PS Always write what you’ll enjoy reading anytime. Good one again

focus commented on the blog post BOOKJAM REVIEW - APRIL 29TH EDITION 9 months, 2 weeks ago

A nice one Idoko. I think the rights of writers here should be taken seriously. I have always believed that a writer should be entitled to his earnings.

focus commented on the blog post JUMPING ACROSS WORLDS 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Thanks to everyone who read. @ray, got the example for the POV break thing. thanks. wth the gain for reading. About the tenses though,how about you read as though i was narrating the tale to you.Maybe you’d see from my angle. Wouldn’t mind another example though. It’d really help. Thanks still

focus commented on the blog post Purple Hibiscus byChimamanda Adichie - A review 9 months, 2 weeks ago

I read the thing around your neck and was impressed. this review makes me hunger for the purple hibiscus. Nice one