nice one girl

@greatnessforlife… ndo oh? (sorry ok?) and thanks

@bubllina….. thanks

disillusioned, naive, wishfull… all the that things we girls are

*power

hey thanks for the well done. Fortunately its not real to me but unfortunately this story is real for someone out there,
i just have the ability to write really sad stories… i guess that’s my own super powers

great post… best part is

“i get off work on a friday and enter the brt buses provided with state funds by an honest politician, stop by a five star hotel and drink a 100,000 naira bottle of champagne […]

wow… 30points? Thanks a lot Tola… *hug*

ok dear… will mail u details.

thanks a lot lot… appreciate

hey oooo…. wetin u donate to me? *dancing*

lol… Life cant always be a dream

Thanks thanks

Oh My,
Thanks *takes a bow*

Thanks

i see your point, but if the bus stopped as it hit her (maybe the bus driver has been stepping on the breaks… you know how bus brakes dont stop automatically) then she would be thrust into the air. […]

hehe..

thanks

Sharp eyes guys… thanks for catching that. will change it

hey, Thanks.

Its supposed to be slow motion of an eventful 10seconds… does that make any sense?

and “stream of conciousness sequence” sorry i dont get.

Thanks

all you people can still apply now… its a workshop and they’ll take care of accommodation and feeding for the time of the workshop.

Just send in your stories sha… you never know

so… i am glad to report that i made all the corrections you guys made and submitted this story for prestigious a writing workshop and got in. thanks guys… much love.

yey! Cant wait! Now going to apply….

After that transcript i really want to meet chika unigwe personally

this was a very good read… cant wait to meet you chika unigwe at the bold and beautiful workshop in july (www.theboldandbeautiful.org)

Loving the feed back guys… Thanks! Keep it coming. Will def correct all the things that’ve been pointed out.