Wow! This is great! loved the first and last sentences,v.captivating. And the diction? Very impressive. Great job!

Awesome!! Almost made me cry.l ditto @4ran6. This is a well-told first post,looking forward to more from you!

@kaycee,lols.

@xikay,lols. The ‘copter would have made this piece an hilarious read.nice thot.

Wow! @Bluegal,i wish every lady could read this. Every word rings with veracity!!!

Lovely story.

Ditto @jaywriter,was beginning to think l was the weirdo of the pack-seeing romance! I see both tho’.
@cikko907, nice concept. I got really hooked 4rm d 1st part. Love the narrator and his version of ‘this is my story’. Now,am wonderin’ why another instalment hasn’t been posted. Still waiting…

Ha! Ha! Xikay, u be real wordsmith, see how u break am down. Na wa O!
Anywayz,nice poem & d msg is so true.
“put on the whole armour of God,that you may stand” God help us!

I disagree with @xikay.people still do see angels,you know,though l agree with the fact that it’s a rare occurence. Thinking about it deeply, you’ll realize that it wasn’t daily that angels were spotted in Bible times too. @muyiscoi, i think you could have modernized the angel part by making his appearance seem like a dream with [...]

Great. I have followed the story till the end and l have to say, am not disappointed! I especially love your use of adjectives. This is one of my favourites: ‘it was lovely absolutely tear-jerkingly gob-smackingly heart-tuggingly beautiful!’ from d 1st part. I noticed in the Final instalment,that the narrator told us little about himself [...]

Hmmmnn… I appreciate the fact that you’re bold about your faith. Most people are usually not,being afraid of what the public would say. I have been encouraged to do the same. At a point l thot it was too preachy too but the message is out and clear. I loved @scopeman’s highpoint too & l [...]

Nyce.felt like a narration at d beginning of an American RomCom.