As usual, another brain candy from you, OALOT. I enjoyed this; however, be careful, young man. The Nazis spoke “perfect German.” Unfortunately they got (is that a hint of ebonics? My bad)tribal with it and embarked on a quest to wipe out folks that were “different.” Show me someone in good old England who speaks [...]

I’ve always told anyone that would listen: The artists, not the politicians, will lead the way in making our presence known in terms of world culture. Decades ago, marginalized voices in the African American community decided to do something about their situation: They said fuck the powers that were (the recording industry) and started something [...]

TO, I commend your effort to take a stab at the “elephant in the room” if you may. Lord knows that if there was a country that needed a revolution, we needn’t look beyond our naija borders. I hear someone say the other day, “Bring back the colonialists.” At least they made the trains run [...]

Xikay,

Okon 2 is coming…

Fred, If I were Bimbo, I’d go there packing, not to kill the SOB, but to protect my ass. It takes away from her rep as a schemer (a sloppy one none the less), to go into the lion’s den not armed, especially if that lion wishes her ill will. Never be afraid to follow [...]

Good stuff, Fred. A slight hole in the plot:1) Bimbo wouldn’t go into her husband’s study without packing some heat (gun), especially since she knew what he knew; 2) All through the story, you’d presented Balogun as being one cool brother who keeps it together even when it’s hot. Heck, at the start of this [...]

Thanks, TO.

Thanks, 2cute4u.

He dey come, xikay. He dey come. Thanks for waiting.

U got a good thing going, bro. This is good! Made my points about typos yesterday, but it takes nothing away from the thrill of the story. Well done. Waiting for the next drop.

Big up, Fred. The plot to this thing is TIGHT. I agree that it’s verbose and needs the editor’s touch in most areas, but that’s why dem born editors, abi? Just kidding. I suggest to edit as much as possible because you never know who’s reading. I eagerly await the next one.

Thanks for the grease, Fred. I’m trying to post on your story but can’t, keeps logging me off. I’ll ask admin whatsup. Thanks for reading.

I think that I’ll oblige you, Jaywriter. Thanks for reading.

Thanks for liking it, xikay.

Will try to, Scopeman. Thanks for the big up.

Working on the next one, Lade. Thanks for reading.

Glad you dig it, Truthchaser.

Thanks for reading, 2cute4u.