Sad story. Well written.

Good lessons. Well done.

Interesting story.

Very creative. Well done!

Okay.

Beautiful and well written story.

Well written story. However, I ditto the last few lines of @drzhivago.

Quite unfortunate it ended that way. Well done

You have an interesting story here. However, there were some tense mix-up and your switching from 3rd person POV to 1st person POV to me, was rather abrupt. Well done.

We may have no control or say about how our begining but we do have a say about our present and future. Therefore being born equal or not is the issue for me.
Even though we may have different destinies, I […]

Well written story. Keep it up!

Nice piece. Enjoyed the story.

Beautiful poem and a good message delivered. However, I think you got your tenses somewhat mixed up. Started with past tense, then switched to present and then to present continuous tense.

Interesting. Showing the contradictions of the human mind and desires.

Crush! We all experienced it. Nice piece.

Nice story Dotta. However, I was almost confused about the plotting of the story. Also watch out for tense mix-ups.

Nice story. Like your descriptive prowess. However, kindly note @guywriter’s points. Well done!

Great poem about a great man that served a great nation. Well done!

Nice poem. Strong message.

Beautiful. I enjoyed this completely. Well done.

I missed.

How serious? Please elaborate.

Thanks!

“The Familiar” is a series of stories on domestic complexities, which explains the disparity between parts 2 and 3.
This story as you may soon realize is someone’s reminisce. However, the points you made have […]

Thanks for stopping by.

Thanks a lot.

Thanks Dotta. More’s coming. Nice name. “winks”

Thanks my Oga. Your points are well noted.

Abeg, biko, ejoor, no get F9 oh! Thanks for stopping by. Got your point.

Thanks so much Tola. I’m already havings ideas in my head as a result of your generous suggestions.