Will have to ditto @tola.

Your MC is the kinda character I love to hate. Kainene’s mother in Amanda’s Purple Hibiscus. Guess you’ll work more on the story. Keep writing, you’ve got huge talent.

@daisy is probably right oh.

Nice poem and quite deep.

@xikay - Been starting a new life. Meeting muses, super sweet muses. And do things me rather inbox you.

Then had issues with my new BB, surfing internet and all. Trying hard now to check all the stuff me missed. Still looking out for new muses as well.

Berry always knows how to do her thing.

(Some) girls will always be girls. Nice stuff.

Did I miss something that you guys didn’t?

Didn’t quite get the story well. But have recently learnt that any work of art that confuses me in a creative way is a good stuff.

Can’t really say more.

Wanted to write ‘hope you make the route better next time’. That first line makes lotta sense now. Maybe not what you intended though.

Fantastic ending. Fantastic characterisation, MC that is. Route had lotta stretch marks shah. Hope you work more on the route better next time.

Nice one.

Nice sad poem. The type that usually get @gretel crying.

Reminded of that sad scene in Revolutionary Road.

Well done. Keep writing with this same soul.

Nice stuff. Just that sometimes what we see after the curtain

I am not a female but kinda enjoyed.

Wish you had found a fling shah and written a little about it. Nice write though. Try and add the fling part next time, lol.

Nice try.