Jefsaraurmax @jefsaraurmax ?
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post COULD THIS BE LOVE??? 15 hours, 5 minutes ago · View
Sarah ,this is so funny, I love it!The humor and the intimity of the couple are great.25 years is definitely love…;0)
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Jefsaraurmax posted a new activity comment: 5 days, 16 hours ago · View
one of the best song ever!
In reply to - posh posted an update in the group Memorable Song Lyrics : I Will Survive by Gloria Gaynor First I was afraid I was petrified Kept thinking I could never live without you by my side But I spent so many nights thinking how you did me wrong I grew strong I learned how to carry on and so [...] · View -
Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post HOLD ME 6 days, 22 hours ago · View
@Brainy Poet: Thanks!
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Jefsaraurmax posted an update in the group IS IT BY FORCE TO WRITE?: 1 week ago · View
Happy New Year everyone! Hope you had a nice holiday/vacation/christmas….;0)
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Jefsaraurmax and Brainy Poet are now friends 1 week ago · View
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post SEX AND THE SIXTY 1 week ago · View
Really funny 007.I like the title and the pace of the story.Nice twist at the end too.
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post this is me 1 week ago · View
I love it Brainy Poet.The first thing that always strikes me in a poem, is the rythm.It has to echo my own heart.And yours does.It’s almost like a song.
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post SCARRED 1 week ago · View
Nice one Yinka.I especially love the first three lines.Seems like something I could have written.I think “made me felt like I meet …” should be “made me feel like I met…”
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post HOLD ME 1 week, 1 day ago · View
@Lade: Thanks.I tried to express what I was feeling recently.
The third line should be:
Words will not shield me, words will not soothe me.I guess I messes up when I was trying to post. -
Jefsaraurmax wrote a new blog post: HOLD ME 1 week, 1 day ago · View
The pain surging like waves and crashingNothing can be said, nothing can be writtenWords will not shield me, words will not soothe meThe pain surging like waves and crashing Nothing can be said, nothing can be written Words will not shield me, words will not soothe me The excruciating hurt, everything falling apart Thoughts of [...]
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post Liquid Blue- Part I 1 week, 5 days ago · View
@Lawal:Thanks! @Raymond:I know what you mean,it was actually longer than my usual stories but I will keep your advice in mind.Thank you! @Love: Thank you! @Jay:Thanks! There is a French movie also with Pierre Richard “La Chevre”, on the same theme.This story was actually inspired by several people I have known over the years who were [...]
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post Liquid Blue- Part I 2 weeks ago · View
@Posh: Thank you!
@Lade: Thanks! I am working on the next part.
@Tola: Thanks and also thanks for the correction.I meant to write Nkechi. -
Jefsaraurmax wrote a new blog post: Liquid Blue- Part I 2 weeks, 2 days ago · View
Nkechi glanced at the mirror. Did she have what it takes? Her brown hair was pulled back neatly in a bun and her eyes were enhanced by a discreet make up. She did look pretty, she thought, and she deserved this promotion. She had worked so hard for it, staying after hours, going over the [...]
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Jefsaraurmax uploaded a new picture: Miami, Key Biscayne 2 weeks, 4 days ago · View
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Jefsaraurmax uploaded a new picture: Miami Beach 2 weeks, 4 days ago · View
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Jefsaraurmax uploaded a new picture: Miami, Brickell 2 weeks, 4 days ago · View
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Jefsaraurmax posted an update: 2 weeks, 4 days ago · View
Happy New Year 2011 to everybody on N.S. ! May your pen never run out of ink and your heart never run out of love!
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post Juagle-E 2 weeks, 5 days ago · View
It was a nice story Jay.I like the plot, the way the feelings are developing and the reference to a movie.Just few things I would like to point out: -the tense shift,probably because of the screen writing. -strech marks on her back? Not sure about this one. -I got confused when you wrote “She had [...]
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post Ekene 1 month ago · View
Nice story Rosie.It’s amazing how you were able to tell so much in few lines.Well done!
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Jefsaraurmax commented on the blog post UNFAIR (1) 1 month ago · View
Good one Shope,I can’t wait for part 2.
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Yeah, it's me been truthful to myself with the help of my companion-my mirror.
Eventually, you'll realise that you only see what your eyes wants to see. You will realise that it is not ...
well written story, it's got adrenaline, especially at the latter chapters. Two thumbs up.
Nice story.
I think that if you had spaced the lines a little, maybe even arranged it in stanzas, it would have ...