Sarah ,this is so funny, I love it!The humor and the intimity of the couple are great.25 years is definitely love…;0)

@Brainy Poet: Thanks!
@Posh: Thanks!

Really funny 007.I like the title and the pace of the story.Nice twist at the end too.

I love it Brainy Poet.The first thing that always strikes me in a poem, is the rythm.It has to echo my own heart.And yours does.It’s almost like a song.

Nice one Yinka.I especially love the first three lines.Seems like something I could have written.I think “made me felt like I meet …” should be “made me feel like I met…”

@Lade: Thanks.I tried to express what I was feeling recently.
The third line should be:
Words will not shield me, words will not soothe me.I guess I messes up when I was trying to post.

@Lawal:Thanks! @Raymond:I know what you mean,it was actually longer than my usual stories but I will keep your advice in mind.Thank you! @Love: Thank you! @Jay:Thanks! There is a French movie also with Pierre Richard “La Chevre”, on the same theme.This story was actually inspired by several people I have known over the years who were [...]

@Posh: Thank you!
@Lade: Thanks! I am working on the next part.
@Tola: Thanks and also thanks for the correction.I meant to write Nkechi.

It was a nice story Jay.I like the plot, the way the feelings are developing and the reference to a movie.Just few things I would like to point out: -the tense shift,probably because of the screen writing. -strech marks on her back? Not sure about this one. -I got confused when you wrote “She had [...]

Nice story Rosie.It’s amazing how you were able to tell so much in few lines.Well done!

Good one Shope,I can’t wait for part 2.