Thanks!

lol. okay oh. no hard feelings

I think there is a fine line between critical and just being mean. I think you almost crossed that line here. Judging by some of the other comments you’ve made here on NS, it seems you tend to do that a lot. You […]

thanks everyone for helpful comments and criticisms. I have tried to solve all the issues raised here that I encountered in episode 2 and have submitted it on NS. So, I’m sure it would become available soon. […]

thanks a lot. I think i get the picture now. I messed up the tenses quite a bit. Hopefully, there would be no such mistakes in the Episode 2.

Once again, thanks for the feedback. Always appreciated.

The usage of “location 1,2, etc.” was done so as to not burden the reader with the task of reading street names that might be difficult to pronounce, thereby detracting from the main story.
It would be really […]

Thanks

Thanks Elly

It’s classic nature makes it timeless. Reviews would keep on being made for ages to come. I don’t think i can ever get tired of reading it

I wrote this using a mobile device. I have had the idea for quite some time but had been postponing it for too long. I did not have access to a computer at that moment and just got down to writing it on the mobile. I guess that affected my case assignment a bit.

@xikay thanks for the glowing comments. boredom and loneliness can be a really good muse sometimes.

Thanks for the comments. I wrote this approximately 2yrs ago. Just thought it was time to share it with you NS folk. So, @Myne, don’t worry. The problem is long solved.

that was meant to be a smiley face. . just to clarify

wow! thanks guys for the comments … and criticisms also. I’ll try to do better next time

thanks for the comments. @jeffunaegbu not exactly what i was going for when i started but i was pleasantly surprised at the outcome

@empresewande @doubleepresso @xikay thanks