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Nnenna Ihebom wrote a new blog post: Pestilence 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Look out! A pestilence! Conceived in a secret lair At the mating of rotten seeds In oppression’s dwelling place The deathbed of innocence Look out! A pestilence! It roves and roars in rage On these highways of terror Devours peace in a gulp Unleashing turbulence Look out! A pestilence! It feeds and grows on blood [...]

Nnenna Ihebom wrote a new blog post: Time Will Tell 7 months ago

Time Will Tell One of the clowns our people crowned Do or die dude, he made his mark Laughing loudest when people frowned He led them down dead alleys dark Abrasive words rankle the mind This haughty hunk cares not a dime ‘I still dey laugh,’he tells his kind His mockery smack in the face [...]

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post I Remember 7 months ago

This is an inspirational story that has a strong moral lesson. I think you should stick to one tense in your narration. Very interesting piece that portrays a strong character. kudos

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post Words to lonely soul 7 months ago

This is a sweet and nice -flowing piece of poetry. Like xikay said, there are some tense issues to be re-visited. For instance, danced and appealed on the second and fourth lines should be in the present tense. Down the lines, there are similar errors. The theme is philosophical and makes one think. kudos

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post FOR THIS LOST ONE 7 months, 1 week ago

Very beautiful piece of poetry, my friend. I love the first two lines. They are powerful openers. The main sentiment of the poem is consistent till the end. Kudos

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post Dear Governor 8 months ago

dwisebaba, this is a nice epistolary story about a performing governor. Hope he does not disappoint this time, but i believe that he deserves another chance. I enjoyed your style of narration and simple diction. The humour is also well-placed. kudos and good luck.

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post THE NEO-JUJU 8 months ago

King Koboko, you won’t believe how many times i have tried to review this story and post a comment without success. I am suspecting the juju content of this your story o. Well, your story gives us a good image of the kind of leader we need now. Anyone who does not feel for the [...]

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post The Heavens are Silent 8 months ago

This is a nice story with a good ending. There were a few issues with punctuation. The last semi-colon may not really be rightly placed. Well done and good luck.

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post THE POWER OF YOUR VOTE IS THE KEY TO YOUR DESTINY 8 months ago

NICE ESSAY WITH A PUNCHY MESSAGE. YOU HAVE SOME INCOMPLETE SENTENCES. pLEASE CHECK AGAIN. KUDOS AND GOOD LUCK

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post The Drunken Prophet 8 months ago

This is a clever piece, my friend. You missed out a few words like in the 3rd paragraph, line three. I like the punchy ending. Good luck.

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post FOR A VOTE 8 months ago

Ray, what i really like about this story is the way you managed your tenses. It shows mastery. Very nice plot, well developed. kudos

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post No Shortcut 8 months ago

I thank you, scopeman for your nice comments. Xikay, many thanks for the carifications. Raymond, be blessed. cheers, y’all.

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post Addled for the Last 8 months ago

The point of this story is very punchy- conscientious decision-making in the electoral process. Very well done

Nnenna Ihebom commented on the blog post The Gene of Greatness 8 months ago

This is a story well told. I vote for that great father. kudos