@ idoko ojabo I should post the second part by the end of this week at long last.

Thanks Funmi-F for sharing a woman’s perspective on falling in ‘love’.It is interesting to see how the sense get mixed up due to the stirring up of emotions lol.

@Jaywriter I am glad you got the message of the poem. Thanks mate.

@Raymond thanks for the kind words.

@xikay Man go chop now u get! But one shouldn’t let work take over the time one spends with family & friends & become a slave to materialism.

I feel your deep pain brother and I like the way you told your story. I understand what you went through as I have been through a similar situation myself in Lagos where I was arrested on the street while talking to my friend because I didn’t have an ID card. These policemen had guns [...]

Thanks for your appreciative words Tola. You spoke the words right out of my mouth with your insightful comments.

Thanks Elly. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks wealth.:)

This is a spooky story that sends shivers down my spine. I believe you have a knack for writing so don’t stop & keep learn from the constructive advice given by others.

Yep yep…you hit the nail on the head bro. It is sad how work sometimes consume us so much that we have less & less time for more important things in our lives such as family & friends.

@ Mariaah Ali I say a big Amen too. Yes, you are right I was referring primarily to(city) workers. I got the inspiration of the poem when i was on the Tube (London underground train)observing those around me.

Wow… This is a stirring story yejide. I love your style of writing and the way you tell the message of salvation. I am sure you have changed peoples’ minds with this story. Well done.

This is a timely message in a world where we are used to following our selfish desires.I am loving the last verse because it shows all is not lost.

Thanks a lot posh for your words of encouragement & praise.