A really long piece of poetry bores me out. Nice write though.

Good work. Try to align the theme of your poem while your rhyme. You did a great work though.

@xikay, Hello, I’m here.

Well there is more to the entire piece, the rhymes must be most you have perceived. Nice to have you read.

Ok. Point taken.

Thanks for dropping by.

Great piece. You need to rearrange the lines of the stanza. And take the correction suggested by Seun Odukoya

The entire theme is great. Short poems altogether. Could be improved.

Nice one.

@Ijeoma, Thank you, I agree with your suggestions. I was too lost in the story to notice these. I appreciate you critical look.

Nice one!

Good. Correct the use of ‘can’ to ‘could’ in your first stanza. A case of tense.

Good…I enjoyed it. You did nice poetry and made a lot of humor. Hmm. NS rocks!

Goodluck to the contenders on this one…NS rocks!