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One of our judges, Tolu Ogunlesi, has returned his commentaries on the top 18 stories. The stories are listed below in no particular order, and with the comments following. We hope that both the writers of these posts and others reading will find this [...] Read More The Vote Chronicles - Tolu Ogunlesi comments As promised, a selection has been made as to which story will be selected for the review that will serve as the basis for the workshop for this week. ‘Linger‘ by Scopeman and ‘The Husband, The Wife, The Doctor‘ by Emmanuella Nduonofit have been [...] Read More Naija Stories Editor Review of ‘Linger’ and ‘The Husband, The Wife, The Doctor’ This is week two of the Naija Stories Online Interactive Workshop, and following the review that has now been published of Good For Something‘, we are once again inviting submissions from members of Naija Stories to be critically reviewed. The reviews will highlight areas in the [...] Read More Win A Review From A Naija Stories Editor (2)! As promised, a selection has been made as to which story will be selected for the review that will serve as the basis for the workshop for this week. ‘Good For Something‘ by Ayokunle Falomo has been chosen, and below is the review done by Tola [...] Read More Naija Stories Editor Review of ‘Good for Something’ Last year, Naija Stories held an Online Interactive Workshop in which ‘Rule Number One’ and ‘She Calls Me Broda’ and ‘Ayoka’s Two Worlds’ were reviewed. Following the success of that workshop we’re pleased to announce the launch of a second workshop. From today, we will [...] Read More Win A Review From a Naija Stories Editor! As mentioned below, the review of ‘She Calls Me Broda’ by Fred Nwonwu and ‘Rule Number One’ by Uche have been done by Tola Odejayi, and are now both published below. ********* Review of ‘She Calls Me Broda’ She walked in with a sort [...] Read More Online Interactive Writing Workshop: Reviews of ‘Rule Number One’ and ‘She Calls Me Broda’ As promised, a selection has been made as to which story will be selected for the review that will serve as the basis for the workshop for this week. ‘Ayoka’s Two Worlds‘ by Lawal Opeyemi Isaac has been chosen, and below is the review [...] Read More Online Interactive Writing Workshop: Review of ‘Ayoka’s Two Worlds’ |
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