Well, School was only fun when we weren’t in class and more fun when we were in class with no teachers to trouble our already troubled minds. Government High School seemed large only when there was punishment to be served. For example, the football [...]
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i liked the story because it had a very real feel while i read it... you did very well indeed... problem ...
Myne, The narration is good and fluid. Was concerned about the dearth of conversations to keep the story alive but when ...
Chukwudum, I believe you watch football so i'll use a football analogy to explain the concept of style to you. ...
if i come across it with something in my wallet, I'll get it...it seems to be promising.
Jay, you did a beautiful work of a priest/pastor... I wouldn't miss any sermon of yours if you preside over ...
Joy, you did a beautiful work of a priest/pastor... I wouldn't miss any sermon of yours if you preside over ...
I like the narration... It is difficult to dislike your male character... It is good you kept off the reason ...
I like the narration... It is difficult to dislike your male character... It is good you kept off the reason ...
Your presentation of passion was vivid and intense. Good one. It didn't feel like being in a prison though.
Chetachi, I found the story very engaging, especially Onyeka's attempt at toasting the MC. Well done. Do watch out for punctuation and ...